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I love you so fucking much,
But I hate you so much more,
I try to escape from your clutch,
But I never make it out the door,

You're kisses so toxic,
The kisses I adore,
But they can be like poison,
I don't want them anymore!

Your eyes make me melt,
But your voice makes me stiff,
All these feelings I've felt,
And only you can stop this,

I want to destroy you,
But I want you as mine,
Can't you see what you do?
Or have you been blind all this time?

Please stop doing this to me...
Listen for once,
As I plea for my sanity,
And pray for your absence.
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Well, I'm really just trying something different, I actually might go into visual poetry. I've been getting lots of inspiration for it.
But yeah, this was the result of me thinking about some emotions I had been feeling a while back and then I decided I would try to put them into words and see how it works.
Hope you enjoy d:

EDIT: OMFGWTFORLY. I changed the last line :D hopefully to have more effect. I think it's better seeings how it took me half an hour to do that one line. But lets see :D
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artfreakkim Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011
AMAZING
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WanderingMercenary Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? thanks!
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:iconartfreakkim:
artfreakkim Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
really really
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WanderingMercenary Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
Awesome combination of love and hate! It has a very good flow and makes you feel every verse. Great work :)
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WanderingMercenary Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, thank you very much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much! And thank you for the fave :D
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LostInRemembrance Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010
no problem :)
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WanderingMercenary Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbowplz:
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Manipulated-Minds Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010
Such emotion. Love him but hate him. I can see how that works. Great poem.
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WanderingMercenary Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
awww, thank you so much! :D
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